Showing posts with label suspense. Show all posts
Showing posts with label suspense. Show all posts

Wednesday, 12 January 2011

Christmas Cracker Suspense Writing

My 8 year old niece loves Christmas.  At lunch she couldn't wait to pull the Christmas crackers and get us all wearing the paper hats, and she particularly liked reading out the cracker jokes.

"What do snowmen wear on their heads? Ice caps!"  
"What do polar bears eat? Ice bergers!"
"What do you call a man with a paper bag on his head? Russell!"

The trouble was she read them out just as I've written them, leaving us no chance to guess at what the groan-inducing answer was.  It was hard to keep the interest going as there was no opportunity to participate.  

Same with writing.  If you set up a problem and give the reader the answer immediately then you've missed on us participating in the story.  If we don't participate we don't engage.  If we don't engage, we stop reading. It's as simple as telling a Christmas Cracker joke.