Saturday 6 November 2010

The Importance of Punctuation I

I came across this from Anna Reynolds, a fellow RLF Fellow and thought it might be a fun exercise for the weekend.

Put punctuation into the following to make it first a love letter, then an ending it letter.

Dear John I want a man who knows what love is all about you are generous kind thoughtful people who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior you have ruined me for other men I yearn for you I have no feelings whatsoever when we’re apart I can be forever happy will you let me be yours Gloria


2 comments:

badas2010 said...

Dear John,
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?
Yours, Gloria.

Dear John,
I want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people who are not like you. Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men I yearn. For you I have no feelings whatsoever. When we're apart I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?
Yours, Gloria.

Sarah Duncan said...

Gold star and top of the class! Think the only difference to my version is Will you let me be yours? at the end. Not that it matters, there isn't a 'right' answer.